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Submitted: April 26, 2010
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Flash / Animations

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An old painting changed to flash animation.

Selected to "Exotique 6 - Most Beautiful CG Art"

Programs:

Photoshop (Painting)
After Effects (Light Effects)
Flash (Animations)
Reason (Music Composition)

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Akina by *MichelVictor ( Featured by $Moonbeam13 )

Critique by ~Thyressarexus Jan 18, 2013, 5:06:50 AM

You've got a nice cyberpunkish mood going on here, with some pretty good ideas. The Asian features, the eye and hair of the girl give an exotic and almost elegant aura, while the pose, the bare skin, the tattoo and the lights maintain an erotic undertone. Gloomy and mystical bass goes with the exotic mood, and playfool higher notes with the beauty of a lady.
The finishing touch is the scifi environment, with the gloves, the clothes, and the background. This is just how cyberpunk should feel like.
I am, however, not really satisfied. It must have took a while to finish this piece, but I still think this is rushed. The music is just a bit too simple, the skin plastic-like: everything is just missing those tiny, final details.
I would recommend you to be more patient, take your time if you are able, and work more on your art. This is cool, but you can do so much better than cool, you can be awesome!

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Critique by ~SuomaSonja Jul 21, 2012, 7:53:47 AM

nice piece of work, and nice music, but i think you can do better than that, you should try to master your music to, you can do on your own on the Reason software, and i think you should try to build more reverb on the track, some EQ to. In rest i think you are on the best way. Mastering the track on Reverb it won't help so much but you should try to master it on Logic. The space designer and delay may help you to increase the originality of the sound and to let space for the echoed sounds to play free around the track, making it to feel more spacey.

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joy 22 22

wow 33 33

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~joeltonongkh Jan 21, 2013

Sexy and gorgeous!

~Maryxa Jan 21, 2013

saludos desde Chile,

*Bluebuterfly72 Jan 18, 2013

I like your cyberpunk version of girl with the Dragon tattoo... This is fantastic work! I am indeed no expert on flash animation, but it's very impactive!! Love!

~Yolinanimai Jan 18, 2013

Wow, I love it!

~Snowflower--Chan00 Jan 18, 2013

LOL.

Okay awesome. Please stay here. :3 (HUGS) Hey can you please read my story KH Shattered memories, and review/comment.

I really hope that my story impresses you enough to watch me.

It would be an honor for you to watch me, and hopefully become friends. :3 (Glomps)

~moonmystery Jan 18, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

finally! I've been watching you for a while now...but it was frustrating to see so many beautiful works that don't get DDs when they totally deserve one. this one finally got a DD congrats!!!

~Snowflower--Chan00 Jan 18, 2013

WOW!!!! Where have you, a brilliant painter/artist, been all my life??? I LOVE THIS PICTURE and dragon tattoos. LOL. (HUGS) Its like she's real!!!! O.O (Glomps)