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However, I found some details that I believe should be corrected in subsequent work.
I think you should emphasize the shadow projection of the chin area, because at a certain angle the colors blend and contour of the face fades.
Considering the movement of the breath, the collar must also have chest movement, or it seems as if floating on his chest.
And there you have a little more careful when drawing the nose
In itself, there are few details that should be corrected, I congratulate you on your good work and keep it up!
Great talent, to be able to use so many different software's.
Well Done!!!
If you allow me I would like to help you improve your animation skills no matter how small they may be(animations that is).
For example, the reflection on the cigarette holder will work much better if the holder itself were moving(even a tiny bit) at the time of reflection occurring, as presently the reflection looks more like small surge of energy moving on its own than a reflection being created by a shiny metal.
Also, if you slowed down the 'Blinking' a bit on some of your characters, they would look so much more realistic. Just add one or two more frames to the blinking and you will see a great difference. But make sure you understand the shape of eyelids as they close and open during a blink, otherwise it would still look mechanical. I can send you a small visual reference if you like.
Keep up the good Work!
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