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Want to learn how to painting and animate like that?
PSD, After Effects Files
Voice Over Painting Video Process
Voice Over Animation Video Tutorial
and much more...
Available through my Patreon
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Great work, as usual! To start with though, the anatomy seems rushed, which may be due to the fact that you are more familiar with realistic anatomy and this image appears to be more stylized. The spine curvature and waist to shoulder ratio appear very unnatural to me for the same reasons. The animation of the mace compresses the woman's forearm rather than moving her arm and wrist. The human voice in the music is very repetitive with little to no change in tonal range, also seems rushed. I really like the color palette and composition. c: The rendering is amazing as usual, but I would suggest a mute button for accessibility.