I've been perusing your artwork and it is all incredible. I love the concept of combing still paintings with animation and music. You take the talent of the painter and combine it with the vision of a movie director.
If you had any desire to improve on this particular painting, I would suggest adding a soft air flow--enough to get the fine ends of her hair to move. I also noticed the reflection of the lights in the girl's eyes: brilliant, but you could create a whole new level of excellence just by reflecting the falling motion of the lights in the girl's eyes.
I will start of with the vision, and say that this is really great as far as vision goes. the detail put into the painting is amazing when I look at it compared to more drawings and paintings than I care to count. All of the colors fit very well, and I'm not sure if the green eyes were supposed to go with the color scheme, or contrast it, but either way they fit in well. As far as originality goes, there may be other poses similar to this, but to have both moving eyelids and a moving mouth is an original thing to me that adds that much more to the piece. The technique is advanced even further by the rising orbs of light and the shapes in the background, and the fact that there is composed music fit in along with the picture. The music adds a side to the emotion that I may not have gotten just looking at the picture. Overall the work put into this definitely paid off in my eyes (and ears).
Man... your work is AMAZING, and THIS especially impressed me. Because of the perfect drawing, really enjoyable music, and because this reminds me a little of Sucker Punch film. Her hair could move a little... but it's perfect, dude! And her recondite smile ? I loved that. Congratulations.
If you had any desire to improve on this particular painting, I would suggest adding a soft air flow--enough to get the fine ends of her hair to move. I also noticed the reflection of the lights in the girl's eyes: brilliant, but you could create a whole new level of excellence just by reflecting the falling motion of the lights in the girl's eyes.
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