Edgy, and beautiful. I love how the music starts off slow, mysterious, and dark then picks up. the music fits in brilliantly with the painting. the background is awesome and as always you did a fantastic job with it. Her cloths are stunning, great use of color co-ordination the girl is dazzling, beautiful and alive in so many ways not just the breathing but the hole personality that goes her, witch you captured really well. The breathing just takes it to a hole new level of aw. One thing that spoiled it for me is the fan. It is dead on the page taking the attraction of the effect off the girl. it would have been nice to see the fan flutter just the slightest.
The girl is absolutely stunning and beautifully executed, and the breathing is just brilliant, really. The music creates a very fitting gloomy atmosphere, so everything matches. The only thing that strikes me as off about this piece is, the contrast between her moving chest and the not-moving fan. When I see them both at the same time it ruins the experience a bit for me, because the "the-painting-is-ALIVE!!" effect isn't complete, since the fan is completely dead. I'm not saying she should wave it or anything, but I think it would finalize the experience if the fluff just moved a bit around the edges.
Anyway, it's really original and creative, just WOW! (:
the background is awesome and as always you did a fantastic job with it. Her cloths are stunning, great use of color co-ordination
the girl is dazzling, beautiful and alive in so many ways not just the breathing but the hole personality that goes her, witch you captured really well. The breathing just takes it to a hole new level of aw.
One thing that spoiled it for me is the fan. It is dead on the page taking the attraction of the effect off the girl. it would have been nice to see the fan flutter just the slightest.
The only thing that strikes me as off about this piece is, the contrast between her moving chest and the not-moving fan. When I see them both at the same time it ruins the experience a bit for me, because the "the-painting-is-ALIVE!!" effect isn't complete, since the fan is completely dead. I'm not saying she should wave it or anything, but I think it would finalize the experience if the fluff just moved a bit around the edges.
Anyway, it's really original and creative, just WOW! (:
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