Kaliza

I almost hate for your talent, good sir.
You managed to take a dark subject and create another dramatic, beautiful piece. The smoke is seamless in the image, and I commend you on that.
I like that you didn't make her stereotype beautiful, thin face, bright eyes, perfect shape, etc. She's still absolutely stunning though.
My only complaint is the breathing. It's done incredibley well, so don't you worry your talented little head. However, the necklace doesn't really seem to move. It just seems to grow which looks unnatural. But there's nothing to fret about really- if I weren't so nit picking I wouldn't have noticed it.
Now, the music behind it suits the theme and create an atmosphere as brilliant as the rest. I was eager to see what this piece would bring partly because of the music while it was loading. It's lovely how it's soft, dark, gentle chiming, but builds up to an almost alterna-rock track. I say almost because there's no heavy guitar riffs, but there's that thrilling few moments of beat and overplay of string[?] instruments before dying away to the softness again. It's absolutely brilliant, and again, I am incredibley jealous of what you do here.