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This is an Animation Comission for: :iconaleenaelyn:
Original Painting:  Aleena by z-a-i-n-a

I am making a huge discount for animation comission 300$ to 125$, this animation is the first one I was noted! There is one slot left! Send me a note!

The music is not mine: www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmUqrf…
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:iconmaikeru01:
I feel bad writing a critique but you asked so here goes:

I think the movement of the head is awkward. It looks like the head is compressing down into the neck unnaturally squishing the face sort of like a balloon, but then the body is strikingly stationary, which is especially noticeable in the hips.

I also think her nose is too pointy for my taste.



All that said, I mean, if this was just a painting it would be amazing. The background is great, the hair and the way it moves is fantastic, the way the lights on the clothes and the floating embers move are really great also.
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23 out of 31 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconoakstudios:
Hello MichelVictor

Excellent job on the animation. Really fantastic work. Attention to detail is great. I especially like how the pupils move and also how the hair strands move with great fluidity. The blink is especially a nice touch. Maybe adding a slight movement on her lips would help her with her expression.

I must agree with the previews reviewer that the head nod is a little awkward. Also the arm movement is a little odd though I understand that you are limited by the artwork.

I do recommend something that may be contradictory, which is to reduce the animation in the background to help focus the viewer on the character.

Other than that excellent work. Really great all around.
What do you think?
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saeu Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017
i dont think ppl breathe through their boobs
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:iconpuffi32:
puffi32 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do, that's wacist
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S0nofKrypton Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
Amazing!
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconyoozek:
yoozek Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
Face like this secretary from NETFLIX's DAREDEVIL :D
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:iconfuccfuse:
fuccfuse Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks awesome! May I ask what kind of program you used?
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 24, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
After Effects!
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:iconfuccfuse:
fuccfuse Featured By Owner May 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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:icongothlyllyon:
GothLyllyOn Featured By Owner May 20, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
:iconmajestic-da:
MAJESTIC-DA
 
HERE'S YOUR MAGIC PLACE

Heart Dance - NaNo28 Friends!  Michel! It's magic!The clolours,the hair and the beautiful expression from her gaze!Daisy thank youfor sharing!!!!!!!! Get Together 
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MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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scifilicious Featured By Owner Edited May 19, 2017  Professional Artist
Great .....music by: Stellardrone - Eternity.... incase anyone wonders :D
www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDJn0S…
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Princess-Lesbian Featured By Owner May 19, 2017
:love: "blackrose:
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:iconcesar3dg:
cesar3dg Featured By Owner May 19, 2017
the melody is so relaxing, i love it.
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconscifilicious:
scifilicious Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Professional Artist
The whole album is great :) if u like: www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDJn0S…
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:icontolosati:
tolosati Featured By Owner May 18, 2017
muhteşem
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
teşekkür ederim
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:icontolosati:
tolosati Featured By Owner May 24, 2017
sağıol
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:icona3kitsune:
A3Kitsune Featured By Owner May 18, 2017
              ONIGIRI THING 
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:iconantonio-ari:
Antonio-Ari Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So freakin cool!   :-)
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconhowlingwindsexy:
howlingwindsexy Featured By Owner May 18, 2017
rather sexy
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconnaruttebayo67:
Naruttebayo67 Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
o_o so cool with moves :nod:
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconnaruttebayo67:
Naruttebayo67 Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are welcome :)
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:iconomarsson87:
omarsson87 Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wooow, this is amazing !
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconburstlion:
burstlion Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Daaaaaamn this is cool!
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconmpz28:
mpz28 Featured By Owner May 18, 2017
very nice  Love  Cool Emoticon Bravo #2
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconprocsan:
Procsan Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice work man! :la:
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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tubi4 Featured By Owner May 17, 2017
Very cool work :dummy:
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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tubi4 Featured By Owner May 23, 2017
Welcome :)
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RODCOM1000 Featured By Owner Edited May 17, 2017  Professional General Artist
That's amazing! I think I need to request another like this one!
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AOGRAI Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work.
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconaograi:
AOGRAI Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome again! ;)
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Morealleylessoop Featured By Owner May 17, 2017
Dis Boy Good...

What's the Soundtrack?
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
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:iconmorealleylessoop:
Morealleylessoop Featured By Owner May 17, 2017
Appreciate you! Got my eyes on you!
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:iconwhetsit-tuya:
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Edited May 17, 2017  Student General Artist
This is cool but her head is so stretchy
Great song
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Done =D
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:iconwhetsit-tuya:
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Student General Artist
Amazing as always
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
I'll try to fix it!
Thanks!
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:icongrace-zed:
Grace-Zed Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:omg: so mesmerizing.... :heart:
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