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Original Music: www.youtube.com/watch?v=HaGOb6…
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The "Good"
Rendering—(both of the animation and the drawing) very smooth and graceful. Shows technical prowess.
Special Effects- The snow, and light beams really contribute to the animation's atmosphere.
Composition- simple, but dynamic and engaging.

The "Could Be Better"
The lighting- confusing to say the least. The light source appears to be above and in front, but the way the face is shaded compared to everything else would suggest otherwise. There is also that mysterious back light that adds to my confusion.
Animation- The shaky came effect makes ir hard to appreciate, or even see the other subtle animation you've done. Speaking of which, the chest warps a bit too much for the breathing. When people take deep breaths their chests go up more than out.
The hair animation is very fluid, but moves more like water than fibers. The free ends of the hair are too stationary, so it doesn't seem to match the forcefulness of the wind.

Nitpick--
Compared to the level of detail elsewhere, the right hand looks sparse.
She looks kind of dead eyed.
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All in all good stuff. The music adds a lot too. Nice touch.
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:iconzappa10:
zappa10 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
So life-like!  Wonderful work!
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconcyrilhxy:
cyrilhxy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017
真棒。
你使用什么软件?
Adobe After Effects?
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you google translate haha
Yes, After Effects!
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:icongothlyllyon:
GothLyllyOn Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
:iconmajestic-da:
MAJESTIC-DA
HERE'S YOUR MAGIC PLACESparkle out of the hat  


Gold Medal Emote :Winner: remake Close Contender Medal + PLZThis Flash Animation Art is exciting. The color contrast , lights and shadows are well balanced .*Zepher*  grabbed our attention.

Through wind and snow the movement of her hair is very well done.Daisy thank youfor sharing this strong heroin!!!!!!!!!! 

                                                                  :doublehug: revamp 
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:icondaivana:
Daivana Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017
The music is fantastic
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconathane:
Athane Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is beautiful
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconsniper32310:
sniper32310 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2017
miss the interactive ones
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Ya, I need back to doing this haha
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:icona3kitsune:
A3Kitsune Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2017
              Onigiri 
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:iconaograi:
AOGRAI Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty Kool!
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconaograi:
AOGRAI Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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:iconcrapopabo:
crapopabo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2017
Sublimate work!
I see only a single defect there: she does not wink, what would have returned the animation completes, in my opinion.
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:iconrodcom1000:
RODCOM1000 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2017  Professional General Artist
 She's breathtaking, thank you!
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Yay!
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:icontubi4:
tubi4 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2017
Very nice :D
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:icontubi4:
tubi4 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017
Welcome :)
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:iconpsychogemini:
PsychoGemini Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2017
The lighting and wind effects are very good along with the rain.
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:icondanielwartist:
danielwartist Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Student Digital Artist
How do you make these animations and how hard are they to upload?
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
I use After Effects, I use flash to create swf and upload it here
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:icondanielwartist:
danielwartist Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2017  Student Digital Artist
are there any tutorial videos you would recommend for exporting from After Effects and getting the right kind of file from Flash?
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
I made a video explaning that in my Gumroad page:
gumroad.com/michelvictor
"How to publish your animation on Deviantart"
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:icondanielwartist:
danielwartist Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Awesome, I may try and make some animations like this of my own.
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:iconthorntong:
thorntong Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Student
Hyper-realistic looking! ✊🏻 #fistbump
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconthorntong:
thorntong Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2017  Student
Anytimez. ;)
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:iconmarwolfdraws:
MarWolfDraws Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is breathtaking.
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconlevellove:
levellove Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
The breathing is perfect, extremely realistic - It looks like she could attack at any second~! 
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconmortalshinobi:
mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017
beautiful as always
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:iconmichelvictor:
MichelVictor Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconmortalshinobi:
mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017
welcome
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